Wednesday, October 19, 2016


      First trip to High School!
It was the first day of High School, and Trent was freaking out! He was scared of making new friends and getting bullied so he took an hour getting ready.

When he arrived to his new school was nervous, also confused by the lockers, but he was focused on making friends. He couldn’t meet any, so he put his stuff in his locker and started to lock it up. Then the lock clicked and, the first bell rang. At the end of the day, Trent was sad to leave but he couldn’t wait for tomorrow.
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2 comments:

  1. 100wcbyWonderWomanOctober 19, 2016 at 8:14 PM

    Great story just fix up a few things,
    When he arrived to his new school he was nervous,
    He couldn’t make any, this i changed because he is new at the school so it would make more sense. thx for reading my suggestions

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  2. AnonymousOctober 20, 2016 at 11:11 AM

    you don't need a comma where you say ''it was the first day of high school, and Trent was freaking out!''

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