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missing crew members (picture of boats in a forest)
The mission was simple, our sailers come in
from Spain to Florida. They were given the orders to go around into Washington
and fly to Florida, but our sailers were stupid enough to go straight to Florida
meaning they would have to cross the triangle. Just as we thought, they went in
and the disappeared of the radar.
20 years later. An island came out of the
water and some sailed over there to check it out, to their surprise, the boats
of the sailer was found they won’t be in the books for long
fix these errors
ReplyDelete-you wrote /sailers/ I think you should change it to /sailors/ same thing in the second sentence. same in your second sentence in your 2nd paragraph.
-also not contractions
-every first letter of a word in your title should be capitalized.
-indent
-double space after a period.
overall nice story.