The punishment
The 1990s was the ear of the troublemakers
named Jason and Daniel Stewart. They would destroy property before they were
fully built, for example. Before the Castle Drogo was built, the boys destroyed
a pillar by sneaking in the bulldozers and destroying the pillars, making the building
collapse.
This act made a large punishment
for the two boys. They decided to destroy the Castle but this time as they were
walking away, a wall was built, a wall made of concrete with Jason and Daniel inside,
with this wall the People of the UK finished the Castle with them inside.
Overall very nice story but you need to
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overall nice story..